Wednesday, July 06, 2011

Class 1 garden

Class 1 have been making a magical garden and writing about it.They have used adjectives,alliteration and similes.
Harry wrote "The screaming gates opened slowly." Joe B wrote "The ivy twitched and twirled around the trees". Emma said that there was a "bright. black, beautiful bug" in the garden and "twisty grass that twirled like a dog's tail."
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